SOLEMN bow
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Where should one
put the loads in his life?
If it's right in FRONT,
it's like a hurdle that
can make one stumble down.
If it's right at the BACK,
it's like a traitor
that destroys without warning.
To feel the weight
of every burden
is a rewarding sacrifice
not a cruel punishment.
The heavier it becomes
the closer one can get
through the doors
of salvation.
It will only take
a candle's flame
to light up the
darkened phases of life.
Kneel down
with your eyes closed.
HE
will listen to the weeps
of your heart.
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"Kneel down with your eyes closed. HE will listen to the weeps of your heart."
ReplyDeleteThis is my favorite line, I can really relate to it :)
i do have a strong faith, i believe everything happens for a reason, just cling on to Him and He will not forsake us :)
ReplyDeletevery inspiring poem :)God speed!
Sometimes, when we close our eyes, we remember things we ought to be.
ReplyDeleteThe best thing is, He is there, close or open eyes. :D
Nice poem you have here!
I mistook bow for vow :) anyway, lovely piece..
ReplyDeleteI know that the title can be mistaken but
Delete"solemn bow" means a deeper prayer...
We all have to humble ourselves in GOD's
holy presence. Thanks for the thoughts.
Thank you for sharing this Ms. Marri... it is truly enriching for the soul, especially for people who are troubled and seeking more guidance from the Lord.
ReplyDeleteEverything happens for a reason and every burden makes us stronger for bigger challenges ahead.
ReplyDeleteit's beautiful. especially when said with eyes closed to feel...
ReplyDeleteyour posts always inspires me whenever I drop here!keep it up
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing the prayer. Very heartfelt.
ReplyDeleteVery inspiring. This post will always remind us to call into Him at all times
ReplyDeleteThis is a heart warming poem. I'm sure anyone would agree. Definitely worth sharing. Kudos for the great work.
ReplyDeletelovely poem... only when one seeks he finds. It reminds me of the song "Lift you your hands to God.." thanks for the reminder!
ReplyDeletevery inspiring.. sometimes people just forget that there is only One who can get them through out from their pains.
ReplyDeletethis is a beautiful piece.
ReplyDeletewith troubles or no troubles, we should always go back to our Lord.
As always, Marri touched us with her poetic mind again :) Very very superb one Marri
ReplyDeleteinspiring entry. emotions were evidently felt. :)
ReplyDeletevery inspiring! love this line - Kneel down
ReplyDeletewith your eyes closed.
HE
will listen to the weeps
of your heart.
this poem is very touching. :)
ReplyDeleteeach and every burden is an opportunity to share in the sufferings of Christ. I always pray that I be given the grace to carry my crosses and He never fails me.
ReplyDeleteI like the thoughts and rhymes. Amen.
ReplyDeleteEverything becomes lighter after a heartfelt prayer.
ReplyDeleteThe Lord doesn't and wouldn't give us hurdles we can't surpass.. :) And yes, the heavier the burdens, the more He shows His love for us as He knows we can go pass it.
ReplyDeleteLovely thoughts :)
ReplyDeletePrayer and Solitude can do wonders indeed for this crazy world we live in :)
God is always there no matter what happens.
This would be the endpoint of every rainbow that we see and encounter. ^_^
ReplyDeletenice reflections here. for every punches we get in life, we should pause for a while and pray. the punches will keep rolling yet we stand alright.
ReplyDeleteWhenever I am weary, or in pain or have problems, I always go to Him. I play "God will make a way", cry and after that all heavy loads are lifted up to Him so I can move on..
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