Simply Gone


Someone came into your life 
and you thought you've found the person 
who could share a lifetime with you.
But an unexpected circumstance caused an untimely end. 
The more you tried to work things out... 
the harder the relationship to survive. 
It's better to part ways than be together miserable.


mye domain's simply gone

40 comments:

  1. Such a nicely made poem but with a very sad ending. Well, maybe in some cases, being away is a way to grow and who knows it might be the growth we need to rediscover love once again.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Sad ending... that's true and the girl in this picture... she's the inspiration. she had two kids and living in Canada now. She's survived being a single parent.

      Delete
  2. Replies
    1. LOVE isn't always a bed of roses... there are thorns that hurt. Sometimes, it's better to let go.

      Delete
  3. Hi Ms. Marri.. May I ask.. was this poem written for someone specific? It sounds really sad.. :(

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Actually, I dedicate this poem to those who love so much and can hardly let go... but the girl in the picture sacrificed her love for the future of her kids. I'm sure, LOVE will eventually find her.

      Delete
  4. I really felt sad reading this poem Mai, hope to read happy one's too =)

    You are a good writer =)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I'm sorry to make you feel unhappy with this poem. LIFE and LOVE can give us pain but the positive side of letting go is... moving on and standing up for every fall.

      Delete
  5. wow! you're so romantic. I love the poem's flow. Heartfelt one kahit na sad ang ending.

    ReplyDelete
  6. Awwwww got touched after reading the poem :(

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. When a person is in loved... sentiments truly rule the heart.

      Delete
  7. What can i say? That's a straight from the heart poem of someone who used to love.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. The truth is... we all felt this lonesome emotion.

      Delete
  8. awww, sad to hear that you need to break apart. hope you'll find another lover again.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Letting someone free is not the end of the world but a best time to start anew.

      Delete
  9. Why is it that we cannot do anything when love is simply gone? The more we try to hold on to it, the more it is forced out of our hands.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. There are things that are not meant to be, Ms Teresa. But, there are things that we deserve and we just have to be patient... it will surely come in HIS time.

      Delete
  10. there's always going to be someone else. (yeah, and i'm talking to the lady who is looking away while sitting by the grass)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Certainly... someone more deserving to love.

      Delete
  11. Lovestruck brings forth powerful eloquence.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Wow!!! So deep... LOVE and its mysterious ways truly make someone very poetic and creative.

      Delete
  12. Aww. This reminds me of a song, "I'd Rather Leave While I am in Love".

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I am not so familiar of the song lyrics but yeah... it's better to leave a relationship bound to break if there's still respect left rather than everything is gone and only hatred remains.

      Delete
  13. So sad. Unfortunately for me, whenever something ends there's always a little anger left...

    ReplyDelete
  14. Ouch! PAK! Sobrang TAMA yun ah. WE need to be apart to mend our broken heart. Haytz. ^_^

    ReplyDelete
  15. sometimes some memories do linger and you become nostalgic of the feelings that were associated with them... and it makes you sad and gloom of those happy times together...

    ReplyDelete
  16. You got my full attention while reading your poem. But this has sad part...

    ReplyDelete
  17. I shouldn't have read this on a Sunday night :( Still, a wise runner once told me, "if there's an uphill, there's a downhill".

    ReplyDelete
  18. sounds like a great loved that left so many mem'ries... it made an ending a sad one... but surely one will come to make sweeter memories... the best is yet to come...

    ReplyDelete
  19. Well, in every moment that we fall down, there's always a chance to stand up and face the future! Cheer up! Life is very good for us to be sad! :)

    ReplyDelete
  20. Sometimes letting go is the best thing to do. It may cause a lot of pain but as the song goes, "there's a rainbow always after the rain"

    ReplyDelete
  21. Sad ending .A love thta fades away.I hope they find time to love each other again or find a happy life separately.

    ReplyDelete
  22. This is nice, but sad. The song "Where Do Broken Hearts Go" came into my mind after reading this...

    ReplyDelete
  23. To me it tells about a love between two people that simply went away and they had to separate ways.. not because there's a third party or any other issue.

    ReplyDelete
  24. Poem that makes someone's heart twitch a bit. Nicely done but message is kinda sad.

    ReplyDelete
  25. seems that the poem is reaaly personal and based on your experience... time will heal and mend the hurting ... scars are left to remind of the lessons we learned from it .

    ReplyDelete
  26. The place looks familiar but I can't remember where I've seen it? Where did you take this picture?

    ReplyDelete
  27. It just reminded me of Arvil Lavinge' song "Happy Ending"

    ReplyDelete
  28. saddest part of life... but you can always choose to be happy

    ReplyDelete

Your thoughts, ideas, opinions and suggestions about my post are highly appreciated. My deepest and warmest greetings to you. GOD bless always!

Share This